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debora_hor'den mesaj - English

    • Write about the oldest person you know

    • Actually, I don’t know many old people.. the ones I can remember are young and middle-aged people only.. so I’ll probably have to choose my mother?
    • My mom is currently 62 years old.
    • Although she’s 62, she’s full of youth, she likes the same entertainment (mainly music) as me, and this is so cool because I have my best girl friend as my mother (normally, best girl friends watch and talk about the hottest male artists when they’re together haha), and this way I don’t need to worry about things that frequently happen between girls, such as envy, betrayal or her absence once she gets a new boyfriend haha (my mom doesn’t seem interested in having a romantic relationship nowadays, although I think she should, because I fear she will feel lonely once I travel abroad), so I think it’s great to fangirl with my mom haha.
    • She’s also very hardworking, to the point of sometimes sacrificing her own physical limits in order to do what she wants to.
    • And her third most important trait is probably her strong, dangerous emotional breakdowns and emotional attachment.. this worries me the most, because I intend to travel abroad to study, and although she still has my brother as a company, I fear she’ll miss me way too much.. so I pray that everything will go well for both of us, at the end.

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    • Actually, I don’t know many old people.. the ones I can remember are young and middle-aged people only.. so I’ll probably have to choose my mother?
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    • Actually, I don’t know many old people..; the ones I can remember are young andldest people that I know are middle-aged people only.. so So, I’ll probably have to choose my mother?.
    • Actually, I don’t know many old people.. the ones I can remember are only young and middle-aged people only.. so I’ll probably. Probably, I would have to choose my mother?.
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    • Although she’s 62, she’s full of youth, she likes the same entertainment (mainly music) as me, and this is so cool because I have my best girl friend as my mother (normally, best girl friends watch and talk about the hottest male artists when they’re together haha), and this way I don’t need to worry about things that frequently happen between girls, such as envy, betrayal or her absence once she gets a new boyfriend haha (my mom doesn’t seem interested in having a romantic relationship nowadays, although I think she should, because I fear she will feel lonely once I travel abroad), so I think it’s great to fangirl with my mom haha.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Although she’s 62, she’s full of youth. In fact, she likes the same entertainment (mainly music) as me, and this is so cool because I have my mother as my best girl friend as my mother (n. ¶
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      ormally, best of girl friends watch and talk about the hottest male artists when they’re together haha), and this way. But, I don’t need to worry about things that frequently happen between girls, such as envy, betrayal or her absence once she gets a new boyfriend haha (my mom doesn’t seem interested in having a romantic relationship nowadays, a. ¶
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      lthough, I think she should, because I fear she will feel lonely once I travel abroad), so. So, I think it’s great to fangirlbe friends with my mom h. Haha.
    • Although she’s 62, she’s full of youth, she likes the same entertainment (mainly music) as me, and this is so cool because I havemy mother is my best girl friend as my mother (normally, best girl friends watch and talk about the hottest male artists when they’re together haha), and. Because of this way, I don’t need to worry about the things that frequently happen between girls, such as envy, betrayal or her absence once she gets a new boyfriend haha (my mom doesn’t seem interested in having a romantic relationship nowadays, although I think she should, because I fear she will feel lonely once I travel abroad), so I think it’s great to fangirl with my mom haha.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
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    • She’s also very hardworking, to the point of sometimes sacrificing her own physical limits in order to do what she wants to.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • She’s also very hardworking, to the point of sometimes sacrificing her own physical limits in order to do what she wants to.
    • She’s also very hardworking, to the point of sometimes sacrificinggoing beyond her own physical limits in order to do what she wants to.
    • She’s also very hardworking, to the point of sometimes sacrificexceeding her own physical limitations in order to do what she wants toachieve her goals.
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 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
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    • And her third most important trait is probably her strong, dangerous emotional breakdowns and emotional attachment.. this worries me the most, because I intend to travel abroad to study, and although she still has my brother as a company, I fear she’ll miss me way too much.. so I pray that everything will go well for both of us, at the end.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • And her third most important trait is probably her strong, dangerous emotional breakdowns and emotional attachment.. t This worries me the most, because I intend to travel abroad to study, and although she still has my brother as a company,. I fear she’ll miss me way too much.. so So, I pray that everything will go well for both of us, at the end.
    • And her third most important trait is probably her strong, dangerous emotional breakdowns and emotional attachment.. tThis worries me the most, because I intend to travel abroad to study, and a. Although she still has my brother as a company, I fear she’ll miss me way too much.., so I pray that everything will go well for both of us, atin the end.
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 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5