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Incoming French Student
Hi!
I am a French student who will come for the first semester at Limerick University, in the IT department.
As I am an organist and a pianist, I would like to know if you have pianos available, and how?
And for organ (I do not have to much hope, It should be okay with catholic church indeed)?
Moreover, are there a music society?
Thanks for all your responses. Yours.

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- I am a French student who will come for the first semester at Limerick University, in the IT department.
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- As I am an organist and a pianist, I would like to know if you have pianos available, and how?
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- And for organ (I do not have to much hope, It should be okay with catholic church indeed)?
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- Thanks for all your responses. Yours.
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