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    • Challenge in life

    • I would like to climb to the top of a mountain someday. maybe it will be a crater of a dormant volcano or just a mountain, such as the Alps.
    • This can be dangerous: avalanches often occur, which are difficult to predict even with modern technology, the higher you go, the colder it gets, and ”mountain sickness”can also develop.
    • Along the way, the body may get tired and the strength to go further may not remain, so not everyone reaches the top of even the highest mountain.
    • People prepare for this test: they train physical endurance, train the body for the test of height, prepare themselves psychologically for difficulties.
    • But all those who were able to withstand this test, without difficulty say that the emotions are simply unforgettable.
  • Trips to volcanoes are no less dangerous and exciting.
  • For example, in 2010, a group of scientists camped for two days 120 meters from the lava lake of the Niragongo volcano.
  • They trained for 4 months.
  • There was gas everywhere, because the volcano was actually active.
  • They went straight to the ring of fire, took a few samples of gas, watched small explosions in the lake, saw the lava come out of its ”Bank” and flow down like a stream.
  • But they stayed there only for one day, because by night the lava filled the crater.

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