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    • The most important thing to consider in this elections

    • The hospitals are all overflowed and the doctors can’t manage the high demand -- there is no sufficient equipaments and no good structure of hospitals, because of the government’s lack of management.
    • Hence, 2020 elections devoted to public health are the keystone to get attention of indecised electores.
    • All of their speech can increase or diminish the popularity of a candidate in this chaotic scenario.
    • We mustn’t forget the economic problems rising up fast in our country due the coronavirus outbreak -- young people are not employed, many students droping out the universities in difficult times and the income inequality between old people and young people stand out.
    • While the old aged already got stability in their lifes, young people is suffering due the lack of jobs and problems with economical crisis.
    • The politics mustn’t be only devoted in public health, but it also must be devoted to improve the conditions of the youth.
    • The youth is the paramount for a better country.

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    • The hospitals are all overflowed and the doctors can’t manage the high demand -- there is no sufficient equipaments and no good structure of hospitals, because of the government’s lack of management.
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    • The hospitals are all overfloweding and the doctors can’t manage the high demand -- there is ino sufficient equipaments and no goodpoor administrative structure ofs within hospitals, because of the government’s lack of management.
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    • Hence, 2020 elections devoted to public health are the keystone to get attention of indecised electores.
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    • Hence, 2020 elections devoted to public health are the keystone to getthe issue of public health during the 2020 elections is vital for getting the attention of iundecisded electorevoters.
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    • All of their speech can increase or diminish the popularity of a candidate in this chaotic scenario.
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    • All of their speechDiscussing this major problem can increase or diminish the popularity of a candidate in this present chaotic scenario.
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    • We mustn’t forget the economic problems rising up fast in our country due the coronavirus outbreak -- young people are not employed, many students droping out the universities in difficult times and the income inequality between old people and young people stand out.
      투표하세요!
    • We mustn’t forget the economic problems quickly rising up fast in our country due the cCoronavirus outbreak -- young people are not employed, many students are dropping out theof universities in difficult times and the income inequality between old people and young people stand outis becoming more stark.
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    • While the old aged already got stability in their lifes, young people is suffering due the lack of jobs and problems with economical crisis.
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    • While the old aged people already got stability in their lifeshave financial stability, young people isare suffering due to the lack of jobs and problems with the economical crisis.
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    • The politics mustn’t be only devoted in public health, but it also must be devoted to improve the conditions of the youth.
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    • The pPolitics mustn’t be only be devoted into public health, but it also must be devoted to improveing the conditions of the youth.
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