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- Egypt
Hello.
- I am in the third grade secondry.I want to be an oncologist.
- I want to learn english because I study midecine in Canada.
This is my goal

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- Egypt
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- ~~Egypt~~Brief Introduction
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- Hello.
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- I am in the third grade secondry.I want to be an oncologist.
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- I am in a secondary school in the third grade ~~secondry~~. I want to be an oncologist.
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- I want to learn english because I study midecine in Canada.
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- I want to learn eEnglish because I want to study m~~ide~~edicine in Canada.
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- This is my goal
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