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  • My home

    • My dream is to live in a big house surrounded by trees and beautiful flowers, contains a set of wide windows to allow passage sunshine during the summer and on the other to enjoy seeing on a beautiful view outside.
    • Designed in the modern style it consists of two floors, on the first floor there is an American designed kitchen, room to receive guests, a living room, and an elegant bathroom catches the eyes.
    • As for in the second floor contains on Three bedrooms each one with its bathroom with a shower and a Jacuzzi.
    • , and should be the furniture of good taste and modern style, even be proper for a building, and for the yard, then there will place to sit under the trees and I will devote suitable space for a swimming pool

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    • My dream is to live in a big house surrounded by trees and beautiful flowers, contains a set of wide windows to allow passage sunshine during the summer and on the other to enjoy seeing on a beautiful view outside.
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    • My dream is to live in a big house surrounded by trees and beautiful flowers, containsing a set of wide windows to allow passage sunshine in during the summer and on the other to enjoy seeingdays to permit enjoyment onf a beautiful view outside.
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    • Designed in the modern style it consists of two floors, on the first floor there is an American designed kitchen, room to receive guests, a living room, and an elegant bathroom catches the eyes.
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    • Designed in the modern style it consistis ofn two floors, o.On the first floor there is an American designed kitchen, room to receive guests, a living room, and an elegant bathroom that catches the eyes.
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    • , and should be the furniture of good taste and modern style, even be proper for a building, and for the yard, then there will place to sit under the trees and I will devote suitable space for a swimming pool
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    • , and should be the furnitureThe furniture should be of good taste and in a modern style, even be proper for a building, and for. It should be in keeping with the building. In the yard, then there will placebe room to sit under the trees and I will devotprovide somewhere suitable space for a swimming pool.
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