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4 Character ”The colour purple”
Sofia is Harpo’s wife, Her actitude isn’t like other women on that period.
She’s strong, big and not submissive.
Doesn’t let Harpo hit her and after all she do for her children ends on jail for beat mayor and mayor’s wife.
Then after years she become maid.
Her six children lives with her sister and Harpo’s girlfriend also help taking care of Sofia’s children

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- 4 Character ”The colour purple”
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Kalimat 1
- Sofia is Harpo’s wife, Her actitude isn’t like other women on that period.
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- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- She’s strong, big and not submissive.
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- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- Doesn’t let Harpo hit her and after all she do for her children ends on jail for beat mayor and mayor’s wife.
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- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
Kalimat 4
- Then after years she become maid.
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- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
Kalimat 5
- Her six children lives with her sister and Harpo’s girlfriend also help taking care of Sofia’s children
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5