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    • The remover and the detergent: from our point of view, these objects symbolize the need to want to erase everything that happened in previous decades since the current family that lived in the house were uncomfortable with the history of the bloodstain, but for The more, they tried it would not go away because the past cannot be erased.
    • The bloodstain: the bloodstain is a very important symbol because it tells us that the tradition of the house and its past is still there and it could be said that it is an accessory that makes the house unique and therefore shows us that there is a persistence of the past to be heard The family Otis: each failed attempt by the ghost to scare the family that lives in the house of this spectrum showed that the family was a symbol of skepticism and the present, seeking to avoid seeing such a funereal and tragic timeline.
    • The girl and the ghost: these 2 characters have a very significant contrast because the attraction of 2 totally opposite poles that are attracted by fate can be clearly seen, the girl represents life and the ghost represents death.
  • A pole tries to free the past and the person who was trapped in that catastrophic destiny.

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    • The remover and the detergent: from our point of view, these objects symbolize the need to want to erase everything that happened in previous decades since the current family that lived in the house were uncomfortable with the history of the bloodstain, but for The more, they tried it would not go away because the past cannot be erased.
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    • The remover and the detergent: from our point of view, these objects symbolize the need to want to erase everything that happened in previous decades, since the current family that lived in the house were uncomfortable with the history of the bloodstain, but f. For The more, though, they tried and it would not go away because the past cannot be erased.
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    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 1Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 1
  • Satz 2
    • The bloodstain: the bloodstain is a very important symbol because it tells us that the tradition of the house and its past is still there and it could be said that it is an accessory that makes the house unique and therefore shows us that there is a persistence of the past to be heard The family Otis: each failed attempt by the ghost to scare the family that lives in the house of this spectrum showed that the family was a symbol of skepticism and the present, seeking to avoid seeing such a funereal and tragic timeline.
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    • The bloodstain: the bloodstain is a very important symbol because it tells us that the tradition of the house and its past is still there and i. It could be said that it is an accessory that makes the house unique and therefore shows us that there is a persistence of the past to be heard.
      The family Otis: each failed attempt by the ghost to scare the family that lives in the house of this spectrum showed that the family was a symbol of skepticism and the       at present, seeking to avoid seeing such a funereal and tragic timeline.
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    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2
  • Satz 3
    • The girl and the ghost: these 2 characters have a very significant contrast because the attraction of 2 totally opposite poles that are attracted by fate can be clearly seen, the girl represents life and the ghost represents death.
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    • The girl and the ghost: these 2 characters have a very significant contrast because the attraction of 2 totally opposite poles that are attracted by fate can be clearly seen, t. The girl represents life and the ghost represents death.
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