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  • Investments

    • I wanted to invest my money to some shares.
    • I don’t have a lot, but I wanted to have kind of strategic reserve.
    • The first year it was not bad, I get some profit by this.
    • But then the crisis began, and outlook not optimistic.
    • In this situation more sensible invest free money to the material things as houses or maybe jewelries.
    • But if will come a global catastrophe the jewelries lose sense too.

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