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  • Theme: World War III

    • Considering the historical past of wars fought by humanity along the millennium, there is a completely possible chance of a Great World War III breaks out.
    • These war will be supported by modern guns and bombs, due to technology improvement, which will add up much more destructive power then in GWWII.
    • Besides, the comming war can also be a ”Cold War type”, because of the internet spying evoluation and the hugh amount of governments’ information saved in PC or internet.

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    • Considering the historical past of wars fought by humanity along the millennium, there is a completely possible chance of a Great World War III breaks out.
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    • Considering the historical past of wars fought by humanity aloduring the previous millennium, there is a completelvery possible chance of a Great World War III breaksing out.
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    • These war will be supported by modern guns and bombs, due to technology improvement, which will add up much more destructive power then in GWWII.
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    • Theseis war will be supported by modern guns and bombs, due to technology improvement, which will add up, due to technological improvement, would be fought with modern guns and bombs, which contain much more destructive power thean they did in GWWII.
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    • Besides, the comming war can also be a ”Cold War type”, because of the internet spying evoluation and the hugh amount of governments’ information saved in PC or internet.
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    • Besides, theAn alternative is that this comming war canould also be a ”Cold War" type”, because of the evolution of internet spying evoluation and the hughe amount of governments’ information saved ion PCs or in internet.
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