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  • Nowadays international tourism has become widespread throughout the world.
    • One part of society believes that international tourism has brought economic prosperity to a number of countries, another art considers that this business generates issues related to nature.
  • This essay will discuss both viewpoints as well as my own perspective on the matter.
  • On the one hand, international tourism has some benefits for host countries.
  • First and foremost, global tourism may encourage governments and investors to invest in this field to create certain professions for local populations.
    • Simply put, a number of vocations are provided in different sections such as hotels, restaurants, taxis, and the sale of souvenirs to meet tourist requirements.
    • Indeed, if nations pay sufficient attention to this subject, they could make plenty of profits that have a positive effect on internal impurity growth.
  • Last but not least, countries may better introduce their culture, customs, and traditions to other people all over the world.
    • Take France as an obvious example, which has become the first country in the tourism industry ranking.
    • Not only could considerately progress in the cultural and artistic fields but it also makes a profit.
    • Thus, international tourism has the potential to have a profound direct and indirect on the economy and culture of countries.
    • On the other hand, this trend may create some problems for the citizens and the nature of the host countries.
    • Tourists sometimes produce a large amount of litter and rubbish which either is not recycled or is a threat to the environment.
    • If these wastes are not immediately disposed of in nature, they may dangerously damage natural animal habitats and mitigate the unspoiled areas.
    • Furthermore, environmental pollution is not specific to nature that includes and villages and urban ecosystems.
    • Air and noise pollution are a common issue in towns and villages than in nature.
    • Due to, when plenty of tourists commute to the target regions, they cause urban traffic to increase in the tourist regions.
  • In conclusion, although both views offered rational reasons for international tourism.
  • In my opinion, the positive side of global tourism advantages over drawbacks, so I believe that this new industry provides many career opportunities for local people.

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    • One part of society believes that international tourism has brought economic prosperity to a number of countries, another art considers that this business generates issues related to nature.
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    • One part of society believes that international tourism has brought economic prosperity to a number of countries, another art considers that this business generates issues relateddetrimental to nature.
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    • First and foremost, global tourism may encourage governments and investors to invest in this field to create certain professions for local populations.
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    • Simply put, a number of vocations are provided in different sections such as hotels, restaurants, taxis, and the sale of souvenirs to meet tourist requirements.
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    • Simply put, a number of vocations are provided in different sectionors such as hotels, restaurants, taxis, and the sale of souvenirs to meet tourist requirements.
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    • Indeed, if nations pay sufficient attention to this subject, they could make plenty of profits that have a positive effect on internal impurity growth.
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    • Indeed, if nations pay sufficient attention to this subject, they could make plenty of profits thatcreating a tourist industry, they could make significant profits which in turn would have a positive effect on internal impurityeconomic growth.
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    • Last but not least, countries may better introduce their culture, customs, and traditions to other people all over the world.
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    • Take France as an obvious example, which has become the first country in the tourism industry ranking.
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    • Take France as an obvious example, which has become the first country in the tourism industry world-wide rankings.
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    • Not only could considerately progress in the cultural and artistic fields but it also makes a profit.
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    • Not only couldhas France made consideratelyble progress in the cultural and artistic fields, but it also makes a profitreceives profits generated by tourism.
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    • Thus, international tourism has the potential to have a profound direct and indirect on the economy and culture of countries.
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    • ThusAs seen from this example, international tourism has the potential to have a profound direct and indirect effect on the economy and culture of countries.
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    • On the other hand, this trend may create some problems for the citizens and the nature of the host countries.
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    • On the other hand, this trend may create some problems for the citizens and the nature of theal environment of host countries.
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    • Tourists sometimes produce a large amount of litter and rubbish which either is not recycled or is a threat to the environment.
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    • Tourists sometimes produce a large amount of litter and rubbish which is either is not recycled or ibecomes a threat to the environment.
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    • If these wastes are not immediately disposed of in nature, they may dangerously damage natural animal habitats and mitigate the unspoiled areas.
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    • If these wastes are not immediately disposed of in nature, they may become dangerously damage to natural animal habitats and mitigate theharm to unspoiled areas.
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    • Furthermore, environmental pollution is not specific to nature that includes and villages and urban ecosystems.
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    • Furthermore, environmental pollution is not specific to nature thatal environments. Other places where it occurs includes and villages and urban ecosystems.
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    • Due to, when plenty of tourists commute to the target regions, they cause urban traffic to increase in the tourist regions.
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    • Due to, when plenty large numbers of tourists commute to theing to target regions, they cause urban traffic tois increased in these tourist regdestinations.
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    • In my opinion, the positive side of global tourism advantages over drawbacks, so I believe that this new industry provides many career opportunities for local people.
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