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    • Basing on strategies for setting SMART goals, I defined for myself 3 different (one short-term, one mid-term, and one long-term) personal goals regarding my academic life: 1.
    • Long-term goal is to complete an MBA program in Berlin by December 2027 with an average GPA not less than 3.80 and get a job as a project manager in the IT field in Germany. 2.
    • Mid-term goal is to successfully complete all the courses required for my major with an average GPA not less than 3.80 and graduate from the university by December 2024 3.
    • Short-term goal is to pass two exams with a score of at least 90 points each and complete two courses that I’m currently taking with the GPA for each of them not less than 4.0 by 1 November of this year.

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    • Basing on strategies for setting SMART goals, I defined for myself 3 different (one short-term, one mid-term, and one long-term) personal goals regarding my academic life: 1.
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    • Basing myself on strategies for setting SMART goals, I defined for myself 3 different (one short-term, one mid-term, and one long-term) personal goals regarding my academic life:¶

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    • Long-term goal is to complete an MBA program in Berlin by December 2027 with an average GPA not less than 3.80 and get a job as a project manager in the IT field in Germany. 2.
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    • LA long-term goal is to complete an MBA program in Berlin by December 2027 with an average GPA not less than 3.80 and get a job as a project manager in the IT field in Germany.in Germany as an IT project manager. 2.
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    • LThe long-term goal is to complete an MBA program in Berlin by December 2027 with an average GPA of not less than 3.80 and get a job as a project manager in the IT field in Germany. 2.
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    • Mid-term goal is to successfully complete all the courses required for my major with an average GPA not less than 3.80 and graduate from the university by December 2024 3.
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    • MA mid-term goal is to successfully complete all the courses required for my major with an average GPA not less than 3.80 and graduate from the university by December 2024 ¶
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    • Short-term goal is to pass two exams with a score of at least 90 points each and complete two courses that I’m currently taking with the GPA for each of them not less than 4.0 by 1 November of this year.
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    • SA short-term goal is to pass two exams with a score of at least 90 points each and complete two courses that I’m currently taking with thea GPA for each of them of not less than 4.0 by 1the 1st of November of this year. ¶
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