Corrections

Am I a good writer?

• I was thinking about Miles, so I wrote his name on a paper using pink pen and drawn hearts around it.

• So, I decided to write my love confession to him: ”All about you is my font of creativity here: your black hair, your tan skin, your silent laugh with your hands covering your mouth, your interest for hero comics, your favorite song is my favorite song as well”.

• The time went by and I kept my heart working on it, despite the incovenient late-night hour.

• ”I look forward to show you my sincere letter handmade”, my mouth said with a lower voice.

• Before twilight could cross into my window, I lay on my bed and slept: I was tired.

• In the afternoon, the doorbell rang and he went in my house.

• I was excited to show my letter.

• I said: ”Miles, if you read my letter you will be the luckiest on the Earth.” ”Noah, are you saying to me the aliens from other planets have more lucky than me?” He give to me his smile, so I said: ”I never will throw your friendship away.

• So, I don’t want to lose you.