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    • A Notice from Public Safety (Mother tongue corretcions only)

    • The man strongly agree with this decision.
    • He thinks that this new park policy will work out better the previous one.
    • In this way, all people can apply for a parking pass and they will be given out wthout any preferencies.
    • The old policy consisted of giving out the pass to faculty and staff first, then to students.
  • The girl doesn’ t agree with him.
    • She says that the parking pass shouldn’ t be given to everyone, and there should be some preferences.
    • For examples many teachers take hours to get to the school, so they really need a pass.
    • Instead, students who live close to the campus doesn’ t need a pass.
    • The man doesn’ t change his mind, and says that other schools are already using this kind of policy, and it’ s working out very well.

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