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    • A local airport has a number of stakeholders who might be directly affected by the decisions that the airport’s managers and owners make.
  • The most obvious of these are airlines.
    • For example, due to the airport’s fault, there may be delays in departures of cargo and passenger airlines (uncoordinated work of refuellers, loaders, or security services).
    • If such incidents do occur, the airports try to deal with the unpleasant incidents and provide benefits for the passengers of these airlines, such as coupons for discounts in cafes and shops inside the airport.
    • For any airline, such incidents cost money and reputation, and if this happens too often and there are other airports in the city, then the airline can simply relocate.
    • If airlines leave this airport, passenger traffic will decrease.
  • This leads us to the next group of stakeholders- tenants.
    • If there are fewer passengers, then cafes and shops at the airport may start operating at a loss.
    • If this continues for a long time, they will simply close their shops and cafes and then the airport will lose profits from the lease of space.
  • Airport employees are also an important stakeholder group.
    • Usually, they are provided with transportation to their place of work from the company or the airport covers all the costs of public transportation.
    • Airports often have special agreements with city transport companies for benefits for their employees.
    • If it is difficult for employees to get to and from work, they will simply find another job.
    • As a rule, a person sitting at the check-in counter, a security check employee, a duty-free seller, or people who place passengers’ luggage should not have any very narrowly specialized skills and most likely it will not be difficult for them to find a job in the city.
  • Of course, the airport will find new employees to replace them, but they also may not work for long for the same reason.
    • A high rate of work turnover will probably cost much more money for the airport than to set up convenient transportation for employees ones.
    • Passengers are also stakeholders and there are many more of them.
    • Airports take care of their passengers by organizing the territory as conveniently as possible so that people do not have to carry heavy loads for too long.
    • If the airport is large, then there are travelators, elevators, employees helping people with limited mobility.
    • If some people are dissatisfied with the airport service, and they decide that they will never use its services again, this will not change much for the airport.
    • There will be new passengers who are flying for the first time or for whom this airport is closer, or only from this airport an airline flies with which they have a loyalty card.

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    • A local airport has a number of stakeholders who might be directly affected by the decisions that the airport’s managers and owners make.
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    • A local airport has a number of stakeholders who might be directly affected by the decisions that the airport’made by its managers and owners make.
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    • For example, due to the airport’s fault, there may be delays in departures of cargo and passenger airlines (uncoordinated work of refuellers, loaders, or security services).
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    • For example, due toit would be the airport management's fault, if there may bare delays in departures of cargo and passenger airlines (due to uncoordinated work of refuellers, loaders, or security services).
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    • If such incidents do occur, the airports try to deal with the unpleasant incidents and provide benefits for the passengers of these airlines, such as coupons for discounts in cafes and shops inside the airport.
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    • If such incidents do occur, the airports will try to deal with the unpleasant incidents and provide benefits forconsequences and will have to compensate the passengers of these airlines, such as with coupons for discounts in cafes and shops inside the airport.
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    • For any airline, such incidents cost money and reputation, and if this happens too often and there are other airports in the city, then the airline can simply relocate.
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    • For any airline, such incidents will cost money and tarnish its reputation, and i. If this happens too often and, then there are other airports in the city, thenwhich the airline can simply relocate to.
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    • If this continues for a long time, they will simply close their shops and cafes and then the airport will lose profits from the lease of space.
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    • If this continues for a long time, they will simply closen their shops and cafes will close and then the airport will loseno longer profits from the lease of the space.
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    • Usually, they are provided with transportation to their place of work from the company or the airport covers all the costs of public transportation.
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    • Usually, they are provided with transportation to their place of work fromby the companyairline or the airport covers all the costs of public transportation.
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    • As a rule, a person sitting at the check-in counter, a security check employee, a duty-free seller, or people who place passengers’ luggage should not have any very narrowly specialized skills and most likely it will not be difficult for them to find a job in the city.
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    • As a rule, a person sitting at the check-in counter, a security check employeepersonnel, a duty-free seller, or people who plachandle passengers’ luggage should not have any very narrowly specialized skills and most likely it will not be difficult for them to find a job in the city.
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    • A high rate of work turnover will probably cost much more money for the airport than to set up convenient transportation for employees ones.
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    • A high rate of worker turnover rate will probably cost the airport much more money for the airport than to setting up convenient transportation for current employees ones.
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    • Airports take care of their passengers by organizing the territory as conveniently as possible so that people do not have to carry heavy loads for too long.
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    • Airports take care of their passengers by organizing the territorproperty as conveniently as possible so that people do not have to carry heavy loads for too long.
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    • If some people are dissatisfied with the airport service, and they decide that they will never use its services again, this will not change much for the airport.
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    • If some people are dissatisfied with the airport's service, and they decide that they will never use its services again, then this will not change much for the airport.
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    • There will be new passengers who are flying for the first time or for whom this airport is closer, or only from this airport an airline flies with which they have a loyalty card.
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    • There will always be new passengers who arwill be flying for the first time or for whom this airport is closer, or only frthose for whom this airport facilitates an airline, flies withrom which they have a loyalty card.
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