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- My travel in the family
- My family and I visited a farm,was an experience wonderful,we have fun much,I’d like to come back more often

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- My travel in the family
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- My family and I visited a farm,was an experience wonderful,we have fun much,I’d like to come back more often
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- ~~My family and~~ I visited a farm~~,was an experience wonderful,we have fun much,I’~~ with my family. It was a wonderful experience. We had a lot of fun. I'd like to ~~come back~~go there more often.
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