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    • Call for PhD position in Earth Science

    • Dear Professor xx, I hope you’re doing well.
    • I have completed my postdoctoral research at xx under Professor Nick Johne supervision.
    • Moreover, I have worked on several different research projects as a graduate in Dr. Nick Johne’s lab.
    • Your research field ”xx” really matches my research interest and is in parallel to my research work.
    • I’m planning to apply to PhD programs, and I’m very interested in the possibility of working in your lab at xx University.
    • I’m getting in touch to ask if you can give me any advice or direction about that.
    • I would be happy if I could join your team and if you could consider me a potential candidate and give me an acceptance.
    • I am attaching my updated CV.
    • I will wait for your kind response.
    • Thanks Sincerely, Samir El Ghayam, PhD.

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    • I have completed my postdoctoral research at xx under Professor Nick Johne supervision.
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    • Moreover, I have worked on several different research projects as a graduate in Dr. Nick Johne’s lab.
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    • Moreover, I have worked on several differentI worked on a variety of research projects as a graduateduring my tenure in Dr. Nick Johne’s lab.
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    • Your research field ”xx” really matches my research interest and is in parallel to my research work.
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    • Your research field ”xx” really matches my research interest and is in parallel to mys my own research work.
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    • Your research field ”xx” reallyin the area of ”XX” is a good matches for my research interests and is in parallel to my research workexperience.
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    • Your research field ”xx” really matches my research interest and is in parallel to my research workI have been following your work, and I discovered that the research you have done in the area of ”xx” is in line with my research background and interest.
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    • I’m planning to apply to PhD programs, and I’m very interested in the possibility of working in your lab at xx University.
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    • I’m planning to apply to PhD programs, and I’m very interested in the possibility of working in your lab to pursue a PhD, and I’m very interested in studying under your tutelage at xx University.
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    • I’m getting in touch to ask if you can give me any advice or direction about that.
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    • I’m getting in touch to ask if you can give med be most grateful for any advice or direction about thatyou can offer me.
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    • I would be happy if I could join your team and if you could consider me a potential candidate and give me an acceptance.
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    • I would be happythrilled if I could join your team and if you cwould consider accepting me a potential candidate and give me an acceptance.
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    • I would be happy if I could join your team and if you could consider me a potential candidate and give me an acceptance.love to be accepted as a member of your team to deliver more groundbreaking research, and I promise you will not be disappointed.¶
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