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  • Hi guys.
    • So, let me introduce myself.
  • My name is Vitaliy Volkov.
    • I'm nineteen and I'm from Kyiv.
    • From 2000 year till 2010 year i was studying in school number 68.
  • When I was in eighth grade, I started skateboarding.
  • I have participated in several competitions, even placed third in one of them. It was cool.
    • I wanted to be like a Tony Hawk ( he is a greatest American skateboarder).
  • But it was just a dreams .
  • In 10th grade I had to choose between a skateboard and External Testing, and I chose External Testing.
  • In 2008 i started going to the math courses and two years latter I entered to the Kyiv Polytechnic Institute.
  • Here I continue studying .
  • And what about my family?
  • My dad is N years old.
  • His name is Stas.
  • Really, i don't know how old is he, and i don't know how old is my mother and my sister.
  • I'll count tonight.
  • So.. my father is main metrologist in one company.
  • I don't know what he doing there.
  • But once i visited him when he was working and I saw a big leather chair.. i sat on this chair, oh, it was great, this chair very comfortable, this chair best chair in the world!
  • My mom is N years old too.
  • Her name is Nadya.
  • She is very nice mom.
  • She draws different drawings.
  • I have a sister.
  • Her name is Kate.
  • She is twenty + years old.
    • She is very nice girl.
  • She is engineer - designer.
  • So..and what about me?.
    • I'm don't know what i want from my life for now, I just want make this world bit better.

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