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Text from Oniria - English

  • Leaving my lovely island

  • These days I feel happy and sad at the same time.The reason is I was admitted to a competition, I don't know if it's the right word, so I have to leave my island to undergo a vocational training and work in France and live there for a while.
  • Leaving everyone I know here makes me feel sad but I have to be optimistic it will be a great experience for me.
    • However, it will be easier for me to travel in Europe, going to Great Britain again.Even if I'm still looking for English speakers to help me to improve my English.
  • Have a nice day everyone.

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    • These days I feel happy and sad at the same time.The reason is I was admitted to a competition, I don't know if it's the right word, so I have to leave my island to undergo a vocational training and work in France and live there for a while.
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    • However, it will be easier for me to travel in Europe, going to Great Britain again.Even if I'm still looking for English speakers to help me to improve my English.
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    • HoweMoreover, it will bemake it easier for me to travel around in Europe, going to Great Britain again.Even ifand go to the UK again. I'm still looking for English speakers to help me to improve my English skills though.
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