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Text from AntonioFisk - English

  • Are you a winner?

  • I used to play “Magic” for many years when I was a teenager.
  • I was quite good at it.
  • I can say that I was one of the best player in Foggia.
    • My friends and I always set up tournaments in our city or used to go abroad for joining competitions and I had often obtained good results.
    • The most important tournament I have ever entered was a special event held in Pescara, which is about 250 km from my city.
  • My friends and I got up early in the morning and we took a train to Pescara.
  • I was very excited.
    • There were a lot of players of every age from all over the Italy.
    • I knew that the tournament was very hard to win, in fact I didn’ t expect a so good result.
  • It started at 9:30 in the morning with a little break for lunch.
  • After lunch many players were already out but I was still in with a good score.
    • We expect the tournament to last at 06:30 pm, but we still had to play the last round by that time.
    • I played the final but I hadn’ t been lucky so I lost.
    • What’ s more the other player was much more experienced in playing “Magic” than me.
  • Despite I didn’ t win the final, I was pretty satisfied of my result and proud of me.
    • All my friends went on to me to congratulate me on my performance.
  • I won a medal and a special discount that I used for buying some rare cards.
    • We came back to Foggia in the late evening and we celebrate the win in a pub, I was very happy as I had really enjoyed that experience.
    • Unfortunately I gave up playing “Magic” some month after that tournament as I needed to move in another little city where there weren’t any “Magic” players who practice it with.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English