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  • Jul 14th

  • At home, we are improving the knowledge in the cooked, in the last week, we've been practices together (2 friends and my girlfriend) made some food that we are know.
    • I taught cook Calzone, pizza, pasta, meatballs and others, they taught me to cook muffins, two cakes, a pie, and some drinks and cocktails.
  • I like working as part of a team.
  • I like leading the teams, and I know that is very important do things out of the real activities, when I was with the tai-kwon-do team, we train in the gym (real activity) but also we go to do something together, somthing different, go to the stadium, go to a bar, cook (everybody knows that I like to cook).
  • In the investigation group always in the meetings, started the meetings with a game to active the attention of everybody, for example, I said my name, after someone say her name and say my name and so with everybody, or sell something rare or ridiculous for example someday a classmate sold to me a make up to horses.

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    • At home, we are improving the knowledge in the cooked, in the last week, we've been practices together (2 friends and my girlfriend) made some food that we are know.
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    • I taught cook Calzone, pizza, pasta, meatballs and others, they taught me to cook muffins, two cakes, a pie, and some drinks and cocktails.
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    • I taught how to cook Calzone, pizza, pasta, meatballs and others, t. They taught me to cookhow to bake muffins, two cakes, a pie, and how to make some drinks and cocktails.
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    • I like leading the teams, and I know that is very important do things out of the real activities, when I was with the tai-kwon-do team, we train in the gym (real activity) but also we go to do something together, somthing different, go to the stadium, go to a bar, cook (everybody knows that I like to cook).
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    • In the investigation group always in the meetings, started the meetings with a game to active the attention of everybody, for example, I said my name, after someone say her name and say my name and so with everybody, or sell something rare or ridiculous for example someday a classmate sold to me a make up to horses.
      투표하세요!
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