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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Poprawiono

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  • Science is the first thing to be financed in the modern world

  • Science has always been an essential part of a developing world.
    • Nowadays, some people strongly believe that scientific issues ought to be highly funded, whereas there are some who are against.
    • I tend to agree with an urgent need in paying a lot of attention to the scientific research.
    • To start with, the latest technological progress made our life much easier.
    • Besides, it gives an opportunity for people to make their own progress while using different scientifically - based technologies.
  • What is more, the development of science leads to the high amount of the working places - there are still people who work in the field of science, as well as computer technologies and machinery.
    • Despite all the benefits that science can bring, there are some drawbacks of an intense scientific progress.
  • The higher the development of science, the less people tend to invest in their own level of intelligence.
    • Moreover, some governments can easily make a huge financial impact in science while do not paying enough attention to the other important spheres of life, such as NHS (*National Health Insurance), Culture and so on.
  • Taking into consideration everything that has been said, I cannot fully agree with the arguments above.
  • Whether any sphere of life is highly financed or developed, one should be aware of their own progress, not blaming anyone.
  • In conclusion, I would like to emphasise the fact of a rapid development of science; it obviously needs more financial support, as well as the other life spheres.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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    • Besides, it gives an opportunity for people to make their own progress while using different scientifically - based technologies.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Besides, it gives an opportunity for people to make their own progress while using different scientifically - -based technologies.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Komentarze
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
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    • What is more, the development of science leads to the high amount of the working places - there are still people who work in the field of science, as well as computer technologies and machinery.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
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    • Moreover, some governments can easily make a huge financial impact in science while do not paying enough attention to the other important spheres of life, such as NHS (*National Health Insurance), Culture and so on.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Moreover, some governments can easily make a huge financial impact in science while do not paying enough attention to the other important spheres of life, such as NHS (*National Health Insurance), Cculture and so on.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Komentarze
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
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    • Whether any sphere of life is highly financed or developed, one should be aware of their own progress, not blaming anyone.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
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    • In conclusion, I would like to emphasise the fact of a rapid development of science; it obviously needs more financial support, as well as the other life spheres.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12