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When Dopey hears the news, is world collapses : a prince fall in love whit Snow White and want to take her whit him in her kingdom.
- The seven dwarves must then make a choice to not let thei beloved.
- And if this choice should cost the lives of many people .

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- When Dopey hears the news, is world collapses : a prince fall in love whit Snow White and want to take her whit him in her kingdom.
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- The seven dwarves must then make a choice to not let thei beloved.
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- The seven dwarves must then ~~make a choice to not let~~decide whether or not to leave their beloved.
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- The seven dwarves must then make a choice whether or not to not let their beloved. be taken away
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- And if this choice should cost the lives of many people .
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- ~~And~~Even if this choice should cost the lives of many people .
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- ~~And~~They must also decide if this choice shcould cost them their lives ~~of m~~anyd pe~~ople~~ rhaps others.
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