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Text from jbmbisneto - English

    • My frist composition for you

  • Hello everybody!
    • I want to learn english because i will leave in australia.
    • I'm going to Purth, weast cost of australian continent.
    • When i'm in Purth i will studie english and work a lot.
  • I want to meet people, first woman.
  • Sory my text is terrible...
  • I love you all !!!!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English