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- I want improve my English
- Hi I'm from Barcelona, and I'm learning English in order to improve my work.
- I like the technology and the world of programming.

alex81spJuly 2013100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- I want improve my English
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- I want to improve my English
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句子 1
- Hi I'm from Barcelona, and I'm learning English in order to improve my work.
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- Hi I'm from Barcelona~~, and~~. I'm learning English in order to improve my work.
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句子 2
- I like the technology and the world of programming.
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- I like ~~the~~ technology and the world of programming.
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