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  • better world to live in peace

    • decades of wars left nothing but damage ,hatred ,ruins ,poor nations , destroyed economies..... and in the end enemies of past were forced to be temporary friends and live in peace together .way of wars is very bad choise . we all have to change our mind into the positive one , support the constructive dialogs .avoid the deconstructive voices ,try to insure of things presented on tv .media sometimes plays the devil role .
  • love and peace

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    • decades of wars left nothing but damage ,hatred ,ruins ,poor nations , destroyed economies..... and in the end enemies of past were forced to be temporary friends and live in peace together .way of wars is very bad choise . we all have to change our mind into the positive one , support the constructive dialogs .avoid the deconstructive voices ,try to insure of things presented on tv .media sometimes plays the devil role .
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    • dDecades of wars left nothing but damage , hatred , ruins , poor nations , destroyed economies..... and in the end Eventually enemies ofrom the past were forced to be temporary friends and to live in peace together . The way of wars is a very bad choise ce. wWe all have to change our minds into thea positive one , to support the constructive dialogs .a. Avoid the deunconstructive voices ,try to insure of things presented on tv ., and always try to criticize things shown on tv. Indeed the media sometimes plays the devil's role .
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