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I want to learn English.
- Today I was 23 years old.
- I am Chinese.When I was young,I don't study hard,so my English basis is so bad.Nowadays I want to learn English,but I don't know how to learn.Can somebody help me?

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- I want to learn English.
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- Today I was 23 years old.
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- I am Chinese.When I was young,I don't study hard,so my English basis is so bad.Nowadays I want to learn English,but I don't know how to learn.Can somebody help me?
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- I am a Chinese.When I was young,I doidn't study hard,so my English ~~basis is so bad.Nowadays~~is not very good .Now I want to learn English,but I don't know how to learn.Can somebody help me?
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