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Meeting People !
- Hi , Everyone !
- I'm girl of 18 years old .
- Arabic is my maternal language but also I have a good base in French .
- I want to meet girls who speak english fluently for improve my english's level So .
- I'll be thankful if you add me :) p.s : This is my Skype : Asma.Coeur

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- I'm girl of 18 years old .
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- I'm ~~girl of~~an 18 years -old girl.
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- Arabic is my maternal language but also I have a good base in French .
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- Arabic is my mnat~~ernal~~ive language but also I have a good ~~base in French~~ French base.¶¶"maternal" refers to something about your mother and not your native something, for example your native tongue.
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- I want to meet girls who speak english fluently for improve my english's level So .
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- I want to meet girls who speak eEnglish fluently ~~for~~to improve my english~~'s level ¶So~~ .
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- I'll be thankful if you add me :) p.s : This is my Skype : Asma.Coeur
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- I'll be thankful/grateful/pleased if you add me :)¶p.s : This is my Skype : Asma.Coeur¶
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