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- MY IDEA
- I want find a idea for a possible business because I am really tired of working for others.
- I have a idea but I haven't the bravery for to start again.

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- I want find a idea for a possible business because I am really tired of working for others.
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- I ~~want find~~am trying to come with an idea for ~~a possible business because I am really~~starting my own business as I am tired of working for others.
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- I have a idea but I haven't the bravery for to start again.
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- I have a idea but I ~~haven't the bravery for to start again. ¶~~
  lack the courage to try it out.
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