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    • After about 3 weeks of containement, I feel sad about what's going on accros the world .
    • Would you have thought that everyone would be talking about the coronavirus ?
    • People and I mean politicians, leaders believed that a whole society couldn't stop working because of a disease .
    • In fact, everything is possible and can change quicky; Moreover, I am very concerned about how some people react as they are desperate and feel isolated.
    • I hope we will learn from this pause and use this time to think about how we live professionaly and personally

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    • People and I mean politicians, leaders believed that a whole society couldn't stop working because of a disease .
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    • People, and I mean politicians, and leaders, believed that a whole society couldn't stop working because of a disease .
    • People and I mean politicians, leaders believed that a whole society couldn't stop workingCould you have imagined that the work of most people, including political and government leadership, could come to a near standstill because of a disease .virus?
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    • In fact, everything is possible and can change quicky; Moreover, I am very concerned about how some people react as they are desperate and feel isolated.
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    • In fact, evert's fair indication that anything is possible and things can change quicky;¶
      ly. Moreover, I am very concerned about how some people react as they are desperate and feelfind themselves in desperate straits amid this period of enforced isolatedion.
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    • I hope we will learn from this pause and use this time to think about how we live professionaly and personally
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    • I hope we will learn from this pause and use this time to think about how we live professionally and personally .
    • I hope we will learn from this pause and use this time to think about how we live professionaly and personally this period of isolation and cessation of much of humans' "usual pursuits" teaches mankind a thing or two about ourselves, society, and how we treat our planet.
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