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    • conference over chinese tourism

    • I'm just come back from a conference over chinese tourism.
    • The topic was not very interesting consequently it was boring and i almost slept. however it was important because i study the economy and china it more and more important in economy view.

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    • conference over chinese tourism
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    • cConference over cn/about/regarding Chinese tourism
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    • conference over chinese tourismI have just come back from a conference on Chines tourism. The topic was not very interesting,it was rather boring and I almost slept listening to it. However it was important for me since I am a student of economics and China is important in that regard for me.
    • cConference over cabout Chinese tourism
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    • The topic was not very interesting consequently it was boring and i almost slept. however it was important because i study the economy and china it more and more important in economy view.
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    • The topic was not very interesting consequentlyso it was boring and iI almost fell asleept. hHowever, it was important because iI study the economy and cChina its more and more important in today's economy view.
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    • The topicsubject was not very interesting consequently it was boring and i almost , so much so I found it very boring and nearly fell asleept. hHowever, it was very important because iI am study thing Chinese economyics and china it more and more important in economy viewneed to be well informed.
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