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- It was a great idea to throw away TV!
- TV programs often contain not a normal situation of our life making through the opinions of reporters and producers.
- Often those situations have only one assessment and I don’t know other facts thus I must think like TV’s producers want.
- I can’t estimate news and situations correctly.
- I believe the Internet has all things which I’m interested in and in the Internet I can find answer for any question and that information will be more truthful.

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- It was a great idea to throw away TV!
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- It was a great idea to throw away my TV!
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- TV programs often contain not a normal situation of our life making through the opinions of reporters and producers.
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- TV programs often ~~contain not a normal situation of our life making through the opinions~~display an unrealistic aspect of our lives. They actually represent the viewpoint of reporters and producers.
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- Often those situations have only one assessment and I don’t know other facts thus I must think like TV’s producers want.
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- ~~Often t~~Those situations often have only one ~~assessme~~viewpoint, and I don’'t know other facts ~~thus I must think lik~~. Therefore, I think what the TV’s producers want me to think.
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- I can’t estimate news and situations correctly.
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- I can’t estimate news and evaluate situations correctly.
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- I believe the Internet has all things which I’m interested in and in the Internet I can find answer for any question and that information will be more truthful.
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- I believe the Internet has all the things in which I’m interested ~~in and i~~. On the Internet, I can find answer ~~for~~s to any question, and that information will be more ~~truthful~~reliable. ¶
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