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  • Personal Statement 2

    • During the 4 years that I attend the college, I wrote the script for two short movies of friends of mine, made two shorts of my own and worked on a dozen of others.
    • Make all those films were really helpful, because it showed me that the illusion was not easy to create.
  • It requires hard work and professional technique.
    • I am willing to work as hard as a peasant in the harvest season, but I do not feel I have the professional technique to perform the trick.
    • My undergraduation major was indeed good, but it was only a introduction to the mysteries of filmmaking.
    • It past two years since I graduated from Film School.
    • Adulthooh means you have to work, earn your money, pay your bills, it does not matter if you are a engineer or a filmmaker, eneryone has to eat.
    • I've worked in the last couple of years, went to many sets, shooted many TV commercials, short movies, experimental stuff, most of time as production manager or assistant director.
    • I have made a couple of films, sent a half-dozen of projects to public funding iniciative.
  • It is the marriage time.
    • My relashionship with film is a lifetime commitment.
    • However, I do not want to work as a producer for the last of my life, not even as a assistant director.
    • I fell in love for film not because I want to manage a big production or fill sheets, but rather because it made me good and happy, like anything eles in the world.
    • It is time for offsprings.
    • I do not want to make small tricks forever, take a coin out of a ear.
    • I want to sew a woman in a half.
    • To achieve this, I have to improve my techinique and attend a MFA in Screewriting would be a awesome way to do this.
    • It would give me the oportunity to learn how to craft sofisticated pieces of enterneinment.
    • If you are looking for a experimented screenwriters, with a long history of movies and scripts, I am not your guy.
    • I am the guy with just a few experience, but with lots of new ideas and willing to dedicate his life to it.

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    • During the 4 years that I attend the college, I wrote the script for two short movies of friends of mine, made two shorts of my own and worked on a dozen of others.
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    • During the 4 years that I attend thed college, I wrote thea script for two short movies ofor friends of mine,. I also made two shorts of my own and worked on a dozen of others.
    • During the 4 years that I attend the college, I wrote the script for two short movies of friends of mine, made two short movies of my own and worked on a dozen ofmany others.
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    • Make all those films were really helpful, because it showed me that the illusion was not easy to create.
      투표하세요!
    • Make allny of those films were really helpful, because it showed me that the illusion was not easy to create.
    • Make all those films were really helpful, because it showed me that the illusionscene was not easy to create.
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    • I am willing to work as hard as a peasant in the harvest season, but I do not feel I have the professional technique to perform the trick.
      투표하세요!
    • I am willing to work as hard as a peasant in the harvest season, but I do not feel I have the professional technique to perform the tricask.
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    • Adulthooh means you have to work, earn your money, pay your bills, it does not matter if you are a engineer or a filmmaker, eneryone has to eat.
      투표하세요!
    • Adulthoohd means you have to work, earn your money, and pay your bills, i. It does not matter if you are an engineer or a filmmaker, enveryone has to eat.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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    • I've worked in the last couple of years, went to many sets, shooted many TV commercials, short movies, experimental stuff, most of time as production manager or assistant director.
      투표하세요!
    • I've worked in the last couple of years, went to many sets, shootedt many TV commercials, short movies, and experimental stuff, m. Most of time ashe time I worked as a production manager or assistant director.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
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    • However, I do not want to work as a producer for the last of my life, not even as a assistant director.
      투표하세요!
    • However, I do not want to work as a producer for the larest of my life,. I do not even want to work as an assistant director.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 12
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    • I fell in love for film not because I want to manage a big production or fill sheets, but rather because it made me good and happy, like anything eles in the world.
      투표하세요!
    • I fell in love forwith film not because I want to manage a big production or fill sheets, but rather because it made me feel good and happy, like anything elese in the world.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 13
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    • To achieve this, I have to improve my techinique and attend a MFA in Screewriting would be a awesome way to do this.
      투표하세요!
    • To achieve this, I have to improve my techinique and attendget a MFA in Screenwriting would be a awesome way to do this.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 17
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    • If you are looking for a experimented screenwriters, with a long history of movies and scripts, I am not your guy.
      투표하세요!
    • If you are looking for a experimentced screenwriters, with a long history of movies and scripts writing, I am not your guy.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 19
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    • I am the guy with just a few experience, but with lots of new ideas and willing to dedicate his life to it.
      투표하세요!
    • I am the guy with just a fewlittle experience, but with lots of new ideas andwho is willing to dedicate his life to ithe craft.
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