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    • Secrets of the old exchange

    • This building is an old Konigsberg's exchange.
    • It was desturb during the World War 2, then was rebuilt with some changes, although in general the building looks the same.
    • Now here is an art Museum.
    • Recently I've visited it for the first time.
    • Name of an excursion sounded promisingly "Secrets of the old exchange".
    • In fact we weren't showed any Secrets, just excursion around the main exhibition and basement descent.
    • In addition inside the building isn't so attractive, although the museum has some plans about its conversion, but as usual it's a distant perspective.

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    • It was desturb during the World War 2, then was rebuilt with some changes, although in general the building looks the same.
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    • It was desturbroyed during the World War 2, then was rebuilt with some changes, although in general the building looks the same.
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    • It was desturbDestroyed during the World War 2, then was rebuilt with some changes, although in general the building exchange building was later restored, albeit with a few modifications, but on the whole it looks the same as it used to.
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    • In fact we weren't showed any Secrets, just excursion around the main exhibition and basement descent.
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    • In fact we weren't showed any Secrets, it was just an excursion around the main exhibition and basement descent.
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    • In fact we weren't showedn any Ssecrets, --just an excursion around the main exhibition and basement descent.
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    • In fact we weren't showedn any S"secrets", just excursionbut we were only led around the main exhibition and basement descrea and to the building's basement.
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    • In addition inside the building isn't so attractive, although the museum has some plans about its conversion, but as usual it's a distant perspective.
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    • In addition, on the inside the building isn't so attractive, although the museum has some plans about its conversion, but as usual it's a distant perspective.
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    • In addition insideAlthough at present the building's interior isn't so attractive, although the museum has some plans about its conversion, but as usual it's a distant perspectiveis planning renovations, though these renovations will not be completed anytime soon.
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