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Holidayyyyyys !!
- Yesterday, I've come back at my home, after one week in Bretagne.
- It was really fantastic !
The sun was with our every days.
- I've do surf, kayak, (plongée ?), Via ferrata, tyrolienne..
Only probleme..
One week it's so short..

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- Yesterday, I've come back at my home, after one week in Bretagne.
  투표하세요!
- Yesterday, I~~'ve come back at my~~ arrived home, after ~~one week in Bretagne~~spending one week vacation in Brittany.
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- It was really fantastic !
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- It was really fantastic !
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- The sun was with our every days.
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- I've do surf, kayak, (plongée ?), Via ferrata, tyrolienne..
  투표하세요!
- I~~'ve do~~ went surfing, kayak~~, (plongée ?), Via ferrata, tyrolienne~~ing, scuba diving, Via ferrata climbing, zip-lining...
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- I~~'ve do~~ went surfing, kayak~~, (plongée ?)~~ing, scuba diving, Vvia ferrata~~, tyrolienne..~~ climbing and zip-lining.
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- Only probleme..
  투표하세요!
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- One week it's so short..
  투표하세요!
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