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    • I described this picture

    • https://cdn.busuu.com/media/resized/national_geographic/640/49c1948c8ad0420580f09d6cbb973e02_1578884892_640.jpg Here it is a colorful python tangled within the branches.
    • I notice its strong tail that is bearing all the weight of its body which is hanging by the tree.
    • It is probably waiting to find prey to snare.
    • I guess there is the jungle which seems to be a bit dry, we can attach this to climate change.
    • In fact, it is possible that there has been a considerable amount of time without rain in that jungle.

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    • https://cdn.busuu.com/media/resized/national_geographic/640/49c1948c8ad0420580f09d6cbb973e02_1578884892_640.jpg Here it is a colorful python tangled within the branches.
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    • https://cdn.busuu.com/media/resized/national_geographic/640/49c1948c8ad0420580f09d6cbb973e02_1578884892_640.jpg¶

      Here it iThe photograph depicts a colorful python tangled within the branches of a tree.
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    • I guess there is the jungle which seems to be a bit dry, we can attach this to climate change.
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    • I guess there is the jungle which seems to be a bit dry, we can attach this to climate changeThe jungle appears to be dry, a condition which I suppose we can attribute to climate change.¶

      Note: There is nothing about the "visible" elements in the photograph to suggest unusual aridity (ie, unusually "dry" conditions). Know that even "rain forests" still experience, ¶
      as they have annually for millennia, prolonged "dry spells" - periods sans rainfall      .
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    • In fact, it is possible that there has been a considerable amount of time without rain in that jungle.
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    • In fact, it is possible that there has been a considerable amount of time without rain in that junglRecommend you DELETE this statement... it is @ once (1) superfluous and (2) merely speculative.
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