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  • Hanami

    • This spring I'm going to see a sakura blossom in Japan.
    • It is really a big event for Japanese.
    • Every year a sakura blossom calendar is compiled by region.
    • This year it is expected a week early then last one.
    • And it is not surprising, looking at winter this year - it's unusually warm everywhere.
    • Japanese even have a special word for cherry blossom viewing - Hanami, it's not just a word, but national tradition, the whole philosophy.
    • The main idea is slow down, think and enjoy life.
    • During flowering (it continues about 7 days) parks are full of people who are indulging in Hanami.
    • It looks like demonstration, so many people around and I hope nature gives me an opportunity to became part of it.

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    • And it is not surprising, looking at winter this year - it's unusually warm everywhere.
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    • And it is not surprising, looking at winter this year - it'sThis should not come as a surprise: this winter has been unusually warm everywhere.
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    • Japanese even have a special word for cherry blossom viewing - Hanami, it's not just a word, but national tradition, the whole philosophy.
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    • Japanese evenalso have a special wordname for the cherry blossom viewing - Hanami, it's not just a word, butit is a national tradition, thea whole philosophy.
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    • The Japanese even have a special word for cherry blossom viewing - H, i.e., "hanami", it's not just a word, but national tradition, the whole philosophywhich is more more than a word: it's a national tradition and a time for philosophical meditation.
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    • During flowering (it continues about 7 days) parks are full of people who are indulging in Hanami.
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    • During flowering (it continues about 7 days) parksThe parks where sakura trees blossom -- the process lasts for seven days -- are fuill ofed with people who are indulgpracticing in "Hanami".
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    • It looks like demonstration, so many people around and I hope nature gives me an opportunity to became part of it.
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    • It looks like a demonstration, there are so many people around andthat I hope nature gives me an opportunity to became part of it.
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    • It looks like demonstration, so many people around and I hope nature gives me an opportunityWith so many people gathered together in one place the "Hanami" has the appearance of a demonstration, one I hope to became part of ithis year.
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