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  • The importance of media and technology

    • Media and technology are inseparable, the more modern the technology, the media can be more developed and expanded.
  • Also the developed social project will use newer things and have wider impact.Nowadays, Social media can be a place for everyone's learning if they can use it positively.
    • Learn languages, socialize across countries, global volunteer, etc. The increasingly highly developed internet makes it easy for humans to access into the new world and contribute the new amazing crazier ideas.
    • In addition, if slamdang (unreachable) area can access the internet, it will make it easier for the people to develop their skills, because all knowledge can accessed by just one click on the computer.

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    • Media and technology are inseparable, the more modern the technology, the media can be more developed and expanded.
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    • Media and technology are inseparable, the more modern the technology, the more the media can be more developed and expanded.
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    • Also the developed social project will use newer things and have wider impact.Nowadays, Social media can be a place for everyone's learning if they can use it positively.
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    • Learn languages, socialize across countries, global volunteer, etc. The increasingly highly developed internet makes it easy for humans to access into the new world and contribute the new amazing crazier ideas.
      투표하세요!
    • Learn languages, socialize across countries, global volunteer, etc. The increasingly highly developed internet makes it easy for humans to access into the new world and contribute the new, amazing and craziery ideas.
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    • In addition, if slamdang (unreachable) area can access the internet, it will make it easier for the people to develop their skills, because all knowledge can accessed by just one click on the computer.
      투표하세요!
    • In addition, if slamdang (an unreachable) area can access the internet, it will make itbe easier for the people to develop their skills, because all the knowledge can be accessed by just one click on the computer.
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