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  • yesterday!

    • Good morning evry body!i want to tell you some thing about me.Yesterday a went to the down town doing some shoping because i must to travel nexte thursday and at night i had go to party me lonely andi came back at homù at two o'clock.Today i wakup on rigt site of bed,i hope that i will past a good day.bye!!!!!!!!!!

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    • Good morning evry body!i want to tell you some thing about me.Yesterday a went to the down town doing some shoping because i must to travel nexte thursday and at night i had go to party me lonely andi came back at homù at two o'clock.Today i wakup on rigt site of bed,i hope that i will past a good day.bye!!!!!!!!!!
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    • Good morning evry body!i want to tell you some thing about me.Yesterday a went to the down town doing some shoping because i must to travel nexte thursday and at night i had go to party me lonely and i came back at homùe at two o'clock.Today i wakup on rigt site of bed,i hope that i will past a good day.bye!!!!!!!!!!
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    • Good morning every body!i I want to tell you some thing about me. Yesterday aI went to the down town doingfor some shopping because i must toI will be travelling nexte t Thursday and that night iI had go to a party me. I was lonely andi I came back at homùe at two o'clock. Today iI wakoke up on the right sitde of the bed,i I hope that iI will pasthave a good day.b Bye!!!!!!!!!!
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