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    • Although the sizable amount of people do not access adequate food, large amounts of foods are wasted by humans all around the world especially in wealthy countries.
    • In my opinion, if members of community access to adequate awareness about, they may assist the government to figure out some appropriate solutions to reduce this phenomenon.
    • There are a number of probable reasons why some people tend to waste food.
    • First and foremost, exaggerated advertising in social media not only encourages people to purchase stuff more than requiring but also presentation most of the time how rich people throw out leftover food in a luxury lifestyle.
    • For example, audiences are watching a table full of various delicious food either on television commercials or movies awhile individuals do not have enough passionate about eating them.
    • Last but not least, the absence of sensible regulations to discourage or punish this function from governments.
    • In other words, governments to control this issue should implement strict limitations in public places such as restaurants, wedding halls, and supermarkets for avoiding waste food.
    • There are some practical solutions to remedy this issue.
    • Firstly, education is the lowest cost and significant parameter for raising the awareness of people in this matter.
    • The social media can make educational podcasts to aware society about the potential dangers of food waste on the environment instead of just advertising and persuade society to purchase novel productions.
    • If people realize that throw out leftover food not only creates serious nature problems but also damages the reserve of national a nation, they may revise on their behavior and performance.
    • Secondly, restaurant owners can cooperation contract with NGO which assist and feed poor families. when customers consider that their food is extra they can pour it in the empty dish on the table before tasting them after that restaurant's staff can collect them to deliver charity organizations.
    • In conclusion, in my opinion, education and effective policies which encourage people to share their foods with needy people can fix this issue so people should improve their information about the negative effect of waste food on community and nature.

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    • Although the sizable amount of people do not access adequate food, large amounts of foods are wasted by humans all around the world especially in wealthy countries.
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    • Although the sizable amount of people do not access adequatea large number of people do have not adequate access to food, large amounts of foods are is wasted by humans all aroundall over the world. This is especially true in wealthyier countries.
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    • In my opinion, if members of community access to adequate awareness about, they may assist the government to figure out some appropriate solutions to reduce this phenomenon.
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    • In my opinion, if members of community access to adequate awareness about, they may assist the government to figure out some appropriate solutions to reduce this phenomenonthis problem could be solved through government collaboration with community members. To better understand why food is being wasted and how solutions can be implemented.
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    • First and foremost, exaggerated advertising in social media not only encourages people to purchase stuff more than requiring but also presentation most of the time how rich people throw out leftover food in a luxury lifestyle.
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    • First and foremost, eis the problem of throw-away culture. Exaggerated advertising in social media not only encourages people to purchase stuff more than requiring but also presentation most of the time how rich people throw out leftover food in a luxury lifestylmore stuff and presents an ideal based on rich lives of excess and waste.
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    • For example, audiences are watching a table full of various delicious food either on television commercials or movies awhile individuals do not have enough passionate about eating them.
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    • For example, audiences are watchingtelevision or movie audiences see a table full of various delicious food either on television commercials or movies awhile individuals, but they also see the people do not have enough passionate about eating ithem.
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    • In other words, governments to control this issue should implement strict limitations in public places such as restaurants, wedding halls, and supermarkets for avoiding waste food.
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    • In other words, governments to control this issue governments should implement stricter limitations in public places such as restaurants, wedding halls, and supermarkets for avoidingto prevent food waste food.
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    • The social media can make educational podcasts to aware society about the potential dangers of food waste on the environment instead of just advertising and persuade society to purchase novel productions.
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    • The sSocial media can makeis a great place for educational podcasts to aware society about the potential dangers of food waste on the environment instead of just advertising and persuade society to purchase novel productionsabout the impact of food waste on the environment. Social media can be used for good, as well as bad.
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    • If people realize that throw out leftover food not only creates serious nature problems but also damages the reserve of national a nation, they may revise on their behavior and performance.
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    • If people realize that throwing out leftover food not only creates serious nature problems for nature but also damages the reserve of national a nationreserve , they may revise onchange their behavior and performance.
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    • Secondly, restaurant owners can cooperation contract with NGO which assist and feed poor families. when customers consider that their food is extra they can pour it in the empty dish on the table before tasting them after that restaurant's staff can collect them to deliver charity organizations.
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    • Secondly, restaurant owners can cooperation contracte with NGOs which assist and feed poor families. wWhen customers consider that their food is extra they can pour it in the empty dish on the table before tasting them after that restaurant's staff can collect themdecide they cannot eat their food, the restaurant can package the leftovers to deliver charity organizations.
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    • In conclusion, in my opinion, education and effective policies which encourage people to share their foods with needy people can fix this issue so people should improve their information about the negative effect of waste food on community and nature.
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    • In conclusion, in my opinion, education and effective policies whichcan fix this issue of food waste. A focus should be on policies that encourage people to share their foods with needy people can fix this issue sod education to inform people should improve their information about the negative effect of food waste food on community and nature.
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