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Pesan dari Maryam1987 - English

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    • Although the sizable amount of people do not access adequate food, large amounts of foods are wasted by humans all around the world especially in wealthy countries.
    • In my opinion, if members of community access to adequate awareness about, they may assist the government to figure out some appropriate solutions to reduce this phenomenon.
    • There are a number of probable reasons why some people tend to towaste food.
    • First and foremost, exaggerated advertising in social media not only encourages people to purchase stuff more than requiring but also presentation most of the time how rich people throw out leftover food in a luxury lifestyle.
    • For example, audiences are watching a table full of various delicious food either on television commercials or movies awhile individuals do not have enough passionate about eating them.
  • Last but not least, the absence of sensible regulations to discourage or punish this function from governments.
  • In other words, governments to control this issue should implement strict limitations in public places such as restaurants, wedding halls, and supermarkets for avoiding waste food.
  • There are some practical solutions to remedy this issue.
  • Firstly, education is the lowest cost and significant parameter for raising the awareness of people in this matter.
  • The social media can make educational podcasts to aware society about the potential dangers of food waste on the environment instead of just advertising and persuade society to purchase novel productions.
    • If people realize that throw out leftover food not only creates serious nature problems but also damages the reserve of national a nation, they may revise on their behavior and performance.
    • Secondly, restaurant owners can cooperation contract with NGO which assist and feed poor families. when customers consider that their food is extra they can pour it in the empty dish on the table before tasting them after that restaurant's staff can collect them to deliver charity organizations.

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  • Kalimat 1
    • Although the sizable amount of people do not access adequate food, large amounts of foods are wasted by humans all around the world especially in wealthy countries.
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    • Although thea sizable amount of people do not access to adequate food, a large amounts of foods are is wasted by humans all around the world especially in wealthy countries.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
  • Kalimat 2
    • In my opinion, if members of community access to adequate awareness about, they may assist the government to figure out some appropriate solutions to reduce this phenomenon.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • In my opinion, if members of a community have access to adequate awareness about it, they may assist the government to figure out some appropriate solutions to reduce this phenomenon.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
  • Kalimat 3
  • Kalimat 4
    • First and foremost, exaggerated advertising in social media not only encourages people to purchase stuff more than requiring but also presentation most of the time how rich people throw out leftover food in a luxury lifestyle.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • First and foremost, exaggerated advertising in social media not only encourages people to purchase stuff more than requiring, but also presentationed most of the time on how rich people throw out leftover food in a luxury lifestyle.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
  • Kalimat 5
    • For example, audiences are watching a table full of various delicious food either on television commercials or movies awhile individuals do not have enough passionate about eating them.
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    • For example, audiences are watching a table full of various delicious food either on television commercials or movies awhile individuals do not have enough passionate about eating them.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5
  • Kalimat 6
  • Kalimat 7
    • In other words, governments to control this issue should implement strict limitations in public places such as restaurants, wedding halls, and supermarkets for avoiding waste food.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7
  • Kalimat 8
  • Kalimat 9
  • Kalimat 10
    • The social media can make educational podcasts to aware society about the potential dangers of food waste on the environment instead of just advertising and persuade society to purchase novel productions.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 10TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 10
  • Kalimat 11
    • If people realize that throw out leftover food not only creates serious nature problems but also damages the reserve of national a nation, they may revise on their behavior and performance.
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    • If people realize that throwing out leftover food not only creates serious nature problems but also damages the reserve of national a nation, they may revise on their behavior and performance.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 11TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 11
  • Kalimat 12
    • Secondly, restaurant owners can cooperation contract with NGO which assist and feed poor families. when customers consider that their food is extra they can pour it in the empty dish on the table before tasting them after that restaurant's staff can collect them to deliver charity organizations.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • Secondly, restaurant owners can cooperation contract with NGO, which assists and feeds poor families. wWhen customers consider that their food is extraemselves that they have extra food, they can pour it in the empty dish on the table before tasting them after that. After that, the restaurant's staff can collect them to deliver to charity organizations.
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    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 12TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 12