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- i like to travel around the world. i have been twice times in london , spain , dubai, new york, marocco, algeria, tunisia. soon i 'll go to canada in early september. i like to learn different culture and make new acquaintances.

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- i like to travel around the world. i have been twice times in london , spain , dubai, new york, marocco, algeria, tunisia. soon i 'll go to canada in early september. i like to learn different culture and make new acquaintances.
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- iI like to travel around the world. iI have been twice t~~imes in l~~o London , sSpain , dDubai, nand New yYork~~, ma~~. I have also been twice to Morocco, aAlgeria, tand Tunisia. sSoon i I'll go to cCanada in early sSeptember. iI like to learn about different cultures and make new acquaintances.
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- iI like to travel around the world. iI have been twice ~~times~~ in lLondon , sSpain , dDubai, nNew yYork, maMorocco, aAlgeria~~, t~~ and Tunisia. ~~soon i~~ In early September, i'll go to cCanada ~~in early september~~. iI like to learn about the different cultures and make new acquaintances.
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