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- Au pair
- I want to lern perfect englisch because i want to go to the USA as an Au pair.
- It is my big dream to live there for some months... i hope that anyone can help me ;)

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- Au pair
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- Au pair¶ Yes, thanks, nice to meet you,
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- I want to lern perfect englisch because i want to go to the USA as an Au pair.
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- I w~~ant~~ould like to learn ~~perfect englisch b~~english, perfectly. ¶Because iI w~~ant to go to the USA as an Au pair.~~ould like to be an au pair in the US.
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- I w~~ant~~ould like to learn ~~perfect englisch because i want~~English, perfectly. Because, I would like to go to the USA as an Au pair.
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- I want to learn ~~perfect englisch b~~English perfectly. Because i w~~ant~~ould like to go to the USA as an Au pair.
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- It is my big dream to live there for some months... i hope that anyone can help me ;)
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- It is ~~my big~~a dream of mine to live there for ~~some~~a few months.~~.. i~~ And hope that ~~any~~someone ~~can~~may help me ;).
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