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- Hi Guys my name is Arnaud I come from Paris,now i live in Montreal and i would like to practice my english. thank you

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- Hi Guys my name is Arnaud I come from Paris,now i live in Montreal and i would like to practice my english. thank you
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- Hi Guys m! My name is Arnaud ~~I come~~, and I am from Paris, but now iI live in Montrea~~l and i~~. I would like someone to practice my eEnglish with. tThank you.
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- Hi Gguys m. My name is Arnaud I coame from Paris, but now i live in Montreal ~~and i~~. I would like to practice my eEnglish. tThank you.
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