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- i'm beginner
Hi!!
- My name is Liliya.I'm from Russia/I like sport.
- I want to find pen-friends, who will help me to study English=)I go to courses of english one years,but I can't still to talk.

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- i'm beginner
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- Hi!!
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- My name is Liliya.I'm from Russia/I like sport.
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- My name is Liliya. I'm from Russia/ and I like sport.
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- I want to find pen-friends, who will help me to study English=)I go to courses of english one years,but I can't still to talk.
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- I want to find pen-friends, who will help me to study English=) I ~~go to courses of english~~have gone to an English course for one years,but I ~~can't still to talk.~~still can't speak it!
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