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Text from nicolas_za - English

  • A CRUEL CRIME

    • When the police arrived, the ambulance and doctors were present to rescue the victim who had unfortunately died of his injuries.
    • The police entered the scene to open an investigation and discovered that there were also bullet marks.
  • Who was this woman?
  • She was 32 years old; she was an actress married for 4 years to director Thierry Hure.
    • The police have started a proximity investigation with Amelie’s neighbors.
  • They testified that they heard gunshots that night and that the couple employed a domestic whose name they did not know.
    • The maid said, I was going down to the first floor when I ran into Mrs. Hure on the stairs, he seemed staggering, so I thought he drank a lot of alcohol.
  • Later, at lunch, he started arguing with his wife.
    • I could not hear the beginning of the discussion, but I understood that Mrs. Hure suspected her of cheating on him with another man.
    • Then, suddenly, he pulled out his rifle and shot him, his shoulder started bleeding… I was scared and I hid right away, but I could still see what was going on.
    • She could crawl to the toilet, she got up to catch a little mirror and hit him; but he grabbed the mirror and broke it, he picked up a piece of the broken mirror, and he stabbed him to death.
  • Then very calmly, he washed his face and hands in a bathroom soaked in blood.
  • The cat entered and looked at the scene and the body lying on Madame Rose’s floor.
  • Mrs. Hure was bored of cleaning the blood, he went back to his room, and it started writing his script again.
  • I was in awe and left as soon as I could to call the police.” The maid’s testimony is overwhelming, the police are waiting for autopsy results and DNA evidence.
  • Mrs. Hure has been in custody since this morning.
  • If you have information about these events you can contact the police.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • When the police arrived, the ambulance and doctors were present to rescue the victim who had unfortunately died of his injuries.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • When the police arrived, the ambulance and doctors were presenthad also come to rescue the victim who. However, she had unfortunately died of hiser injuries.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
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  • Frazo 6
    • They testified that they heard gunshots that night and that the couple employed a domestic whose name they did not know.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • The maid said, I was going down to the first floor when I ran into Mrs. Hure on the stairs, he seemed staggering, so I thought he drank a lot of alcohol.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • TWhe maid said, n questionned, this domestic, a maid, testified: "I was going down to the first floor when I ran into Mrs. Hure on the stairs, he. H seemed to be staggering, so I thought he had draunk a lot of alcohol."
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
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    • I could not hear the beginning of the discussion, but I understood that Mrs. Hure suspected her of cheating on him with another man.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I could not hear the beginning of the discussion, but I understood that Mrs. Hure suspected her of cheating on him with another man.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
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    • Then, suddenly, he pulled out his rifle and shot him, his shoulder started bleeding… I was scared and I hid right away, but I could still see what was going on.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Then, suddenly, he pulled out his rifle and shot him, hiser! Her shoulder started bleeding… I was scared and I hid right away, but I could still see what was going on.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
    • She could crawl to the toilet, she got up to catch a little mirror and hit him; but he grabbed the mirror and broke it, he picked up a piece of the broken mirror, and he stabbed him to death.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • She could crawl to the toilet, s. She got up to catchgrab a little mirror and hit him with it; but he grabbed the mirror and broke it, he picked uptook a piece of the broken mirror, and he stabbed himer to death with it.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11
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    • I was in awe and left as soon as I could to call the police.” The maid’s testimony is overwhelming, the police are waiting for autopsy results and DNA evidence.
      Voĉdoni nun!
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