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    • Meaning of my life.

    • Yesterday I woke up and finally understood the meaning of my life.
    • It's amazing to think about it , how mush power and energy we have to handle with challenges and difficulties that our life is brings to us in every step we make.
    • I feel better today when I found that I have a choice that can change my life for better.
    • I know that now my life its never going to be the same and I'm in the beginning of changing.

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    • It's amazing to think about it , how mush power and energy we have to handle with challenges and difficulties that our life is brings to us in every step we make.
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    • It's amazing to think about it , how mush power and energy we have to handle with challenges and difficulties that our life is brings to us in every step we makeThe energy and strength we must must invest when negotiating the myriad challenges we face in our lives are amazing.
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    • I feel better today when I found that I have a choice that can change my life for better.
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    • I feel better today when I found that I have a choice that can change my life forToday, upon discovering that I can reach decisions that will improve my life, I felt noticeably better.
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    • I know that now my life its never going to be the same and I'm in the beginning of changing.
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    • I know now that nowit is a new day and that my life itswill never going to be the same and I'm in the beginning of changing. s it was.
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