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    • I like go to shopping to buy me new clothes, t-shirt, jackets or jeans.
    • I’m especially in shopping centre because there are a lot of stores in one place.
    • I love good quality clothes and affortable.
    • I also like shopping onlive but mainly for computer products because they are much cheaper and there are more choices.
    • The problem with the internet is the delivery, there is always a risk that products are stolen, or are faulty To don’t have problem I selected serious site that refund me if I have a problem.

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    • I also like shopping onlive but mainly for computer products because they are much cheaper and there are more choices.
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    • I also like shopping onlivne but mainly for computer products because they are much cheaper and there are more choices.
    • I also like shopping on live but mainlyne, for computer products, because they are much cheaper and there are more choices.
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    • The problem with the internet is the delivery, there is always a risk that products are stolen, or are faulty To don’t have problem I selected serious site that refund me if I have a problem.
      투표하세요!
    • The problem with the internet is the delivery,; there is always a risk that products are stolen, or are faulty¶To.¶So that I don't have any problems I selected seriouschose sites that refund me if I have a problem.
    • The problem with the internet is the delivery, t. There is always a risk that products are stolen, or are faulty¶To don’t.¶ In order not to have problem, I selected serious sites that will refund mey money if I have a problem.
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