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  • A kite

    • Quite often, espesially in non swimming season on our sea you can watch how people fly a kite and usually those people are adults.
    • I've never flown a kite, although I'd like.
    • Moreover I have no idea why it's considered as children's amusement, even adults not always manage with this task.
    • The sea shore in non swimming season probably includes more different activities then in summer period, when it's just "fur seal rookery".
    • My friend and I like make picnics on the sea, play with ball or just walking, and I hope once to add in this list launch a kite.

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    • Quite often, espesially in non swimming season on our sea you can watch how people fly a kite and usually those people are adults.
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    • Quite often, espescially in nonduring out of season times for swimming season oin our sea, you can watch how people fly a kite and usually those people are adults, usually adults, flying a kite.
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    • Moreover I have no idea why it's considered as children's amusement, even adults not always manage with this task.
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    • Moreover, I have no idea why it's considered as children's amusementfun activity, even adults do not always manage with this tasksucceed at it.
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    • The sea shore in non swimming season probably includes more different activities then in summer period, when it's just "fur seal rookery".
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    • The sea shore in nonOut of the swimming season, the seashore probably incluprovides more different activities then in the summer period, when it's just "fur seal rookery".
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    • My friend and I like make picnics on the sea, play with ball or just walking, and I hope once to add in this list launch a kite.
      투표하세요!
    • My friend and I like makto have picnics onat the seaside, play with a ball or just walking, and I hope once to add in this list launch a kite. to add I hope to launch a kite (at least) once.
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