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Text from Neem25 - English

    • my beautiful sunflower (poem)

  • ...And you are as sweet as a sunflower, which is watering for the breeze of the heaven each morning...
  • I see that angels down to earth every day for painting your beautiful and magic petals, one by one at the beginning of the day like an art painting...
  • You have my admiration, because I see you like a perfect piece, a great piece you are in this world, unique, without comparison, a piece made for God, one sublime piece for the eyes which live in the soul and the heart...
  • You, pure magic in this world...
  • You, majesty of God,...
  • you, a beautiful labour of God... You, my love.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English